The first time that character is seen should be pivotal point in your story. The more important the character, the more important the writing needs to seem to a reader.
Characters and the Intro
Tag: introductions
How does the Beginning Affect a Story
The first chapter is one of the most important parts of your book, because it serves as the hook to get the reader to finish your novel. Aside from grabbing the attention of a reader, there are a few other critical roles that a first chapter fulfills.
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